Betrayed Love Movie Draft 2 Picture

Blah, old icon, didn't have time to find the old one again, sorry!

So I made some more changes, I'm getting down to the time where I don't have enough time to completely complete it, but I have enough time to make a few more changes to it, so if anyone has a suggestion as to what desperately needs fixing, especially related to timing, I'd love to hear them!
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