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At long friggin last!

Two reasons this took long: swamped with homework and also didn't want to crank out a shitty page just to have one, so the first few versions of this got scrapped. I know some of the buildings in the background are lumpy. I will fix them if/when I polish up the pages in tone or color. Right now I want to be critiqued on the story, the page layout, and the figures. Is it entertaining, can you follow the action from panel to panel and page to page, and do the people and animals look right? LET ME KNOW.

God I hope you guys are still reading. ;_;
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