Betrayed Love Animatic Picture

so I did this a really long time ago... but after the animations I have in my gallery. see, I felt like I needed to start over, and I think this animatic is better than the last version of it, but I haven't done any animation for it. Well I started too... but it was coming out the same, and the point was to make it better. So I gotta figure out how to be a better animator before I can start this thing over.

edit: it did a lot of goofy things like crop it wrong, so there's extra space at the top and made the first frame blue.... and sorry... the loader isn't working....... let me know if this causes problems

I think it works better here: [link]
but it may take much longer to load
Memory
Days of Yore - Ch1 Page24
Betrayed Love Animatic
Narcissism_Allure
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