Daddy's Girl 70 Picture

In Greek mythology, incomplete fertilization methods sometimes gave birth to quite weird or even monstrous offspring. Since I'm using the tradition where Athena had a mother, only her birth was a deviation from the normal, but she's still a bit messed up in her own way.

Quite funny... Demeter's daughter Persephone had a completely normal conception (probably), was born the usual way and probably had one of the most happy and peaceful childhoods of all the Olympians... but in my version she's still a pretty weird girl. Well, I guess everybody in that family is a bit crazy in their own way.

Question: Would it sound better if Demeter used the word "conception" instead of "fertilization" in the fifth panel? I just couldn't decide which was the most fitting.
Nyx: Dancing across the Sky
Quietus: Desiring Spring
Daddy's Girl 70
Hades and Persephone with writing this time
Hello Princess Giselle