Nemesis half body concept Picture

Here’s a half body concept of Kenyo’s inner hate he’s name is Nemesis (yes like the one from Greek mythology I think it fits him) well I think I personally like the design however I do not see much improvement in my self.

I tried my best to color it nicely but I really don’t know how that turn out
Ramses II the Pharaoh
Nemesis half body concept
Nemesis reff