Echo and Pan's Song Picture

Please watch it all and I'd appreciate some feedback, mainly on the lyrics than the voice haha. This is the song Pan and Echo since after an argument they have. Echo turns and leaves and Pan returns to his quarters on Olympus. Pan is obsessed with Echo and she doesn't love him at all.…

I tried to animate it, but it was taking too long and I'm hungry haha. I'll fully animate soon. Then I'll animate Narcissus' song about his love with his reflection
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Echo and Pan's Song
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