Daphne and Apollo Picture

This is a ink pen of Daphne transformin into a laurel tree. Apollo is chasing after her (yes, that is a leaf covering his vital regions). Daphne's father is the river god behind the catails. He turned his daughter because she asked him to. It was the only way to avoid the advances of Apollo.

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Apollo and Daphne by Bernini, Galleria Borghese
The Flight of Daphne
Daphne and Apollo
Catching Daphne
Apollo and Daphne - 2008