Bringer of Void-ReDraw Picture

This is a re-draw of the Bringer of Void, Khaos. He will be in my upcoming novel. I wasn't satisfied with the first drawing of him but this one is still crap. I just can't draw him the way I imagine him.
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Bringer of Void-ReDraw
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