Apollon and Artemis pg1 Picture

Basically, I'm doing a comic about the early lives of the twin Greek deities Apollon and Artemis. Any comments and questions (i love proving i know tons about mythology to people) are welcome.
This is page 1, where we find Zeus cheating on Hera with Leto, who is now exiled by Hera, plus about a thousand mythological references already!
HadesXSeph: L'Amour de Grenade
Apollon and Artemis pg2
Apollon and Artemis pg1
Apollo and Artemis