Artemis - rough Picture

I need three poems by March 5 for a contest at my school...get to be on Prosidy, a poetry program on WYEP if I win. This is one I hashed out today, but I am not happy with it yet. I think it reads too much like a story, and that it needs to decide between styles. Any comments are welcome. I'll post the final when there is one. I'm also bummed out I didn't include Narcissus, but Artemis didn't kill him, she just made him fall in love with himself. Maybe I like him too much to be nasty to him in my poem.
Zoe (PJatO)
Maidens of the moon
Artemis - rough
Actaeon's Earthe
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