Prologue of Forsaken No Longer Picture

"Forsaken No Longer(Name Still Tenative), to be adapted into a manga, is the prologue to a story of greed and corruption and a quest to uncover the truth. This started off as an original myth about human sacrifice I had to write for my Mythology class last semester, but I liked it enough to alter and expand it into this prologue."

I've finally made all my edits and such and here is the, hopefully, final draft. If all goes well, it will start to be drawn this weekend and pages shall be posted eventually on the artist's dA, which I will link to... eventually. Now... Read and Review!
Harpy Gal
Prologue of Forsaken No Longer
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