Halcyone Picture

This is my visual interpretation of the Greek Myth of Halcyone. If you don't know the story then feel free to read the paragraph about her at the bottom of this description (it is the very short, clipped version).

Tools:
5B - 9B graphite pencils
paper stumps
knead-able eraser
mechanical eraser
A4 paper

any comments, critiques, helpful tips or hints would be greatly appreciated
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