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By the Gods, it hath returned!

Ye olde dialogue tyme...

Please comment on the Egypty goodness! I am interested in advice on the appearance and mechanics especially, whether or not the comic is easy to follow and understand is of utmost concern. Is it sloppy? Confusing? Hard to read? LET ME KNOW!
If you have a comment about my mythology being wrong, keep it to yourself. I have done much research and have carefully selected which versions of which myths to be using. Feel free to ask questions, and I will explain, but it is highly doubtful I will change the mythos of the story based on your comments.
The Sum of All
Spyro - Skylander Scathach
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