The Great Darkness Picture

Trying to make my own little creation myth
Well this guy...
Is the "supreme being"
the guy *is* the universe
and all the darkness in it, not evil, but not good either.

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His energy is stored around the darkness.
They are what we would call stars or suns.
He depends on this energy, but cannot control it because he wouldent get past the light it gives.

So, evry star(sun) has a planet (or more).
On evry palnet he put a creature that he formed in his own image (guardians). They guard the suns.

Some of these guardians hated the light, some guarded it like they were told, but some felt the warm light and felt joy.

One guardian wanted to embrace the energy.
The energy went into his body giving him extreme powers.
He ended up becoming what would later be called a god.

He started shaping his planet, and eventually giving it life.

The Great darkness later finds out about this god, and a couple of others.

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Wont write anymore, guess the story isent what i want to show
well, what do you think does the picture look mythological?
and
if you read the story, what do you think?
any changes?
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