ConCrete Page 1 Picture

Rough draft page 1 of my latest book, ConCrete. An experimental, metaphorical story that takes place in the lost city of Minoa. With some inspiration of one of my best friends, this was born, and was only supposed to be ten pages long. It's more than twice that size and has become something epic.

Erm, no Artist's comments on this first page. Except, I'd like to note that there are fish inn the sky. Not birds.

--Final Note
If my handwriting is illegible, please let me know in the comment box. I'll try and make it better in newer pages.
The Usual Greeks
ConCrete Page 1
King Minos - SC IV
Persephone Silhouette